"Hawkeye" by Melissa Stockham
Chapter 1
Graham pushed the chain link gate open
as far as it would go with the heavy chain holding it to the fence.
He slipped his wiry form through the opening and bent to pick up his
backpack that he’d thrown over the fence.
He slid it back on and adjusted its
weight before continuing his shortcut home. He surveyed the
half-burnt ruins of the old mental hospital and silently agreed with
his friends. The place looked creepy as hell.
Jacob told him he was nuts for cutting
across the property, but it shaved a good twenty minutes off his walk
home. Until he had a good reason not to, he would use his shortcut.
He kicked a rock down the concrete
pathway until it skittered off into the weeds. He watched it go and
focused on the walk through the courtyard to the other side of the
property.
It was the scariest part to travel
through. The first time he’d taken his shortcut he had done it at
a sprint, which had resulted in a skinned knee and torn pants. Not
to mention a bruised ego.
The flame darkened windows were still
sinister, anything could be hiding behind them. The fact that they
were covered with bars didn’t help calm his imagination any less.
The thought of all those people trying to get out while the building
burned around them, stopped by the bars that were supposed to keep
them safe…
“Slow down,” he muttered when he
realized he’d started running, “stop being a baby.” He shoved
his hands in his pockets and made his way to the giant statue in the
middle of the courtyard.
General ‘Hawkeye’ Smith's bronze
form was covered in pigeon poo. Graham glanced up to look at the
General stare off into nothingness and tripped. He caught himself
and looked down to see what the offender was.
His shoelace had come untied.
He placed his foot up on the base of
the statue and leaned over to tie his shoe. As he was finishing his
knot he heard something above him. He glanced up and saw a pigeon,
flapping its wings and laying a dump on the General’s shoulder.
Then he saw that the General had moved.
He backed away from the statue slowly.
No doubt about it, the General had gone from gazing off into
nothingness to staring straight at him. He felt a chill down his
spine and he shivered. He wondered if the pigeon poo had finally
weighed too much for the old statue and its head had tilted. That
had to be the answer. Then it blinked.
Graham didn’t wait to see what else
it could do. He ran. He heard something else move behind him,
creaking and groaning like a car being mashed. He wasn’t about to
turn and see if the general had come off his perch. He ran faster,
hoping his gangly legs wouldn’t trip over themselves as they often
did when he was least expecting.
His heart was pounding in his ears as
he reached the other side of the grounds. Usually he’d repeat his
steps of throwing his backpack over the fence and slipping through
the gate. Today, he cleared the eight foot fence in about three
seconds, landing with a crash into an ugly heap complete with scraped
hands.
He turned around. He gasped for breath
and searched the area for whatever could have been chasing him. The
grounds were quiet. Nothing looked remotely out of the ordinary. A
quiet breeze moved the weeds back and forth that had sprung up
against the fence.
His hands stung as he stood up and
wiped them on his pants. He inspected the damage and picked a few
pebbled out of his skin. At least his pants weren’t torn. His
mother would be happy about that. She a warped sense of humor, 'torn
skin healed easier than torn pants'.
He inhaled deeply and turned his back
on the ruins, not hearing the giggles that were carried away by the
wind.
Most of his family was home when he
arrived. His older brother’s piece of crap car was in the
driveway, and his legs sticking out from under it. He heard Alex
tinkering with something, and gave his legs a brotherly nudge as he
walked into the house.
“Sure hope your grades are up!”
Alex hollered from under the car. Graham was grateful for the heads
up. Mom must be on an ‘I need to be a better mother, so I’m
going to scrutinize your life for the next few days and see what I
can do to fix it’ kick. She did it about once a month. Graham
found it annoying, as much as he knew that it was her way of showing
love. Parents were so weird.
He walked in the house and plopped his
backpack down on the couch. “Mom! I’m home.”
“M’kay! Do your homework.” Mom
called from the kitchen. So predictable.
Ruby was on the couch, reading, as
usual. His younger sister always had her nose in a book. She
glanced up at him briefly to acknowledge his presence, and added a
glare because he had almost hit her with his backpack.
“Sorry.” He grinned. Sisters were
so fun to tease.
She shook her head and proceeded to
ignore him.
He wandered into the kitchen where mom
was starting dinner. Something from scratch and not store bought.
Sweet.
“Hi sweetheart,” she leaned over
and kissed his hair like a little boy. He sighed, wishing he’d
reach a growth spurt. Ruby was taller than he was, which sucked.
Alex was much taller. The gene had skipped him somehow.
He watched his mom putter around for a
moment. “So, I cut through the hospital tonight.”
Inwardly, he loved the disapproving
look Mom gave him. Outwardly, he looked repentant. “Creepy stuff
there. I heard something moving around.” A giant bronze statue
with bird poop…
“Probably some homeless looking for a
place to live. Don’t go through there anymore.” She gave him
the ‘I mean it’ look.
“M’kay, sorry.” He felt better,
hearing Mom’s reasonable explanation. “Did they ever figure out
how it burned down?” He glanced down at his scraped hands and
decided it was time for a wash. He headed to the kitchen sink and
turned on the water.
“No. I don’t think it was a bad
thing either. That place was old. They’d remodeled it so many
times there was hardly enough to call original building. If it
wasn’t on the historical record, I’m sure the city would raze it
and start over. What did you do to your hands?”
“Tripped.”
She shook her head, “You are not
going to be a pallbearer at my funeral.”
“Ouch, that’s cold, Mom.” It was
a running joke in his family about his inability to stay on his own
two feet.
He finished washing his hands and
flicked water on Mom, who flicked some back. They grinned at each
other and he slipped out of the kitchen before she could ask about
his grades.
He went to retrieve his pack. He
picked it up and turned to walk away when Ruby spoke. “You better
stop taking that shortcut. There’s no homeless people there. It’s
haunted.”
The chill he’d felt earlier tickled
his spine. “Shut up, it is not.”
She turned a page on her book, “Fine,
don’t believe me. Even though, I did write my state history report
on it last year. It’s definitely haunted.”
He cringed and took the bait. “Why
do you say that?”
“It started out as a military
barracks. General ‘Hawkeye’ Smith was in charge of it then.
Lots of soldiers died there in the Civil War during a siege. Then,
after the war, they expanded it with more buildings and turned it
into a military hospital. Then the government turned it over to the
state and they filled it with mentally ill. They weren’t very
advanced back then. They did crappy stuff to the patients, thinking
they were helping. Combine that with low funding and low staff to
patient ratio and it was a real mess.”
“Ruby, no twelve year old I know uses
the word ‘ratio’ in a sentence,” Graham pointed out.
“Just the nerds do,” She smiled
proudly at him. “Anyway, lots of people died there. Soldiers,
doctors, patients, nurses, babies. There is even a cemetery on the
grounds. I talked with a nurse who worked there before the fire; she
told me tons of ghost stories. That place is filled with them.”
“Overachiever. You are the only nerd
I know that would actually visit the place you are doing research
on.”
She stuck her tongue out at him. “Just
telling you. The place is haunted.”
He couldn’t disagree at the moment.
The General’s blank bronze eyes were still fresh in his memory.
He picked up his backpack and started
to head to the basement when his Dad came home. He walked in the
door, sorting the mail as was his habit.
“How’s everyone?” He asked,
giving Mom a kiss.
“Fine, except Graham is taking a
shortcut through Hawkeye to get home.” Mom looked at Graham.
He rolled his eyes, of course she’d
have to pull Dad into it. Two parents ganging up on you were better
than one.
“Knock it off.” Dad gave him a
stern look, “That building could fall at any moment, and there are
probably drug dealers and kidnappers running around there.”
The drug dealers and kidnappers were a
new twist. Would they hang around with all the ghosts there?
Somehow, Graham doubted it.
He assisted his sister with setting the
table as Alex came in from working on his car. Mom and Dad insisted
on dinner together, something about the moral fiber of society
depending on it.
Afterwards, he did his homework and
watched Alex fiddle with some piece of machinery at the kitchen
table.
“Dad’s gonna kill you if you
scratch the table,” He pointed out to his older brother.
“Dad’s always gonna kill me for
something.” Alex muttered. He tinkered with the part and swore as
oil spilled out of it.
“Now Mom is going to kill you too.”
Graham added.
“Not as dead as you’ll be if you go
in Hawkeye again.” Alex said, wiping up the mess before it dripped
off the table.
“I don’t see what the big deal is.”
Graham turned back to his homework. “It’s not like I went inside
or anything. I just cut through the grounds.”
Alex pointed a screwdriver at him,
“That’s what Lyle Johnson was doing, and you know what happened
to him.”
Graham inwardly growled as another of
his siblings dangled bait in front of him that he couldn’t resist.
“What happened to him?”
“No one knows. He always used
Hawkeye as a shortcut. Bragged about it too, that he had some kind
of hideout set up in there. Then one day he never came home. They
searched the place from top to bottom, found a stash of his stuff
sprinkled with some cocaine, and that was that. Cops were sure that
some druggie had whacked him.”
“You and Dad say drug dealers, and
Ruby says ghosts.” Graham closed his Algebra book.
“Maybe both.”
“Drug dealing ghosts. Yeah, you hear
a lot about them in the news. Cops can’t keep them locked up
because they keep walking through walls.”
Alex snorted. “Seriously. If you
were a drug dealer, where would be the best place to hide stuff?
Someplace haunted, that’s what I’d do.”
Graham digested this, and the fact that
his brother had actually thought where to hide illegal paraphernalia,
and then hit the shower before going to bed.
Chapter 2
For the next week, Graham took the long
way home. He dutifully walked around the perimeter of the hospital,
glancing at its looming form with the darkened windows. He wondered
briefly if the General was still on his perch covered in pigeon poo.
If he was a giant moving statue, he’d
be splatting those pests like flies.
He had fully intended to keep his
promise to stay out of Hawkeye, until it rained that Friday.
It wasn’t just a little drizzle. It
was a full out brawl in the skies with lightning, thunder and a
downpour. He was pretty sure he couldn’t get any wetter than if
he’d stepped into the shower with all his clothes on.
The gate to Hawkeye looked inviting.
He was pretty sure all the drug dealers and baddies wouldn’t come
out on a day like today. He tossed his backpack over and slid
through the gate. He picked it up and ran towards the main building,
finding a dry patch under the front door of the old hospital. He
dropped his pack on the ground and hugged himself, shivering. He
hated being a skinny kid with no body fat to keep him warm.
The storm didn’t let off. He sank to
the ground, leaning against the door of the hospital and hugging his
knees. He buried his head for a moment while the air crackled around
him. Mom was so going to kill him for not taking a jacket,
especially since it was the last thing she’d yelled to him before
he’d walked out the door. He started brainstorming a way to make
nice, or maybe get pity.
He felt the door behind him vibrate
right before it flew open. He fell backwards into the foyer of the
hospital and smacked his head hard on the floor.
Normally, he didn’t swear. Ever. He
didn’t think it made you look cool or sound grown-up, and there
were better, more creative words to use. But at that moment he let
go with a loud string of curse words.
He saw stars for a moment, as
he rubbed his head.
He then heard someone giggling.
It was enough to set his hair standing
on end and get his feet in motion. He raced outside into the rain
and ran as fast as he could.
His vision was impaired by the rain,
and he slid on the wet pavement a few times. He made it to the
courtyard and was passing General Hawkeye’s statue when it came to
life.
This time, it didn’t just tilt its
head and blink. It came off its pedestal and plucked up Graham like
a baby kitten and held him between two fingers.
He screamed and thrashed as the thunder
roared. He was pretty sure he might have lost control of other
bodily functions as he cried like a little girl.
The large statue carried him back to
the hospital doors and dropped him unceremoniously on the ground into
the foyer. It left the building and slammed the door shut behind it.
Graham scrambled back to his feet and
wiped his nose. He ran for the door and tried to open it. It
wouldn’t budge an inch.
“I’m sorry, I’m so sorry.” A
voice came from behind him. He slammed his body against the door to
get away from this new threat.
A girl was walking towards him. She
was pale and thin, her hair messy and tangled. Her clothes were
dirty and covered with soot, along with her smudged face.
She gave him a smile, that didn’t do
much to relax him, and slapped a hand on the door. The bang echoed
through the hospital. “General! That was very mean! You let him
go right now!”
Graham heard a rumbling and scraping of
metal on the other side of the door. It was then flung open and he
saw the bronze statue retreating into the rain.
The girl stared at the floor. She was
his height, which wasn’t much of an accomplishment. “He knows I
get lonely, and you make me laugh. He was trying to help.”
Graham opened and shut his mouth like a
fish for a moment. “Are you a…ghost?”
She nodded, looking at him from under
her long dirty stringy hair.
“And that…thing?”
“That’s General Hawkeye. He didn’t
want to leave his men or his family, so here he is, wandering around
protecting the place.”
“So this place is haunted.”
She nodded, “Most definitely
haunted.”
He shivered. “How long have you
been…”
“Dead?” her face brightened a
little, “About six months, during the fire. I was here visiting my
dad with my mom when the fire broke out. We were stuck inside.”
“Sorry.”
She shrugged, “It’s no big deal. I
just get kinda lonely, there’s no other kids.”
There was a large crash behind them,
and he saw a dirty vase filled with dead flowers smash into the
ground.
She rolled her eyes, “No other kids
my age. Joey is about 7, and a pain.”
Graham coughed, “Wow.” He felt
cold again and shivered. He rubbed his arms up and down to warm
them.
“Anyways, the General is really nice,
promise, he knows I liked to watch you every day. When you
didn’t
come back, I was sad.”
“You watched me?” Graham raised his
brows.
“Yes. Everyday. It made me feel
normal for a minute. Like I lived in a normal house again and could
watch kids walk home from school like I used to do.”
Graham exhaled, “This is totally
blowing my mind.”
“Yeah, it blew mine too.”
“Look, I gotta go, or my mom is going
to send out a search party.” He reached down for his backpack that
he had left behind.
She nodded, “OK. Will you come
back?”
He chewed on his lip for a moment. Her
eyes were hopeful, and she wasn’t some scary zombie faced gross out
chick with burnt skin, she looked pretty normal. “Ok, but only if
the General will stop scaring the crap out of me.”
She smiled. Her teeth were white and
stuck out sharply in contrast to her dirty face. “Deal.” There
was another large crash as a mirror landed on the ground. She
sighed, turning around and shouting, “KNOCK IT OFF, JOEY!”
Graham checked to see that there was no
large heavy objects above him before walking out the door.
She raced to the doorway and called out
to him in the rain, “What’s your name!”
He turned around in the drizzle and
called back, “Graham.”
“I’m Tyanne! Come back soon!”
He nodded, and trotted off in the rain
towards home. He passed by the General’s statue. The bronze eyes
followed him, much like a protective father staring down his
daughter's new boyfriend.
“Be nice!” Graham reminded him.
3 comments:
I love a good ghost story. And you can't have a better setting than a creepy, abandoned asylum! Love the voice and pacing. Good job!
You moved me swiftly through a fun and believable ghost story. The family give/take was right on. The fear experienced by the boy made me so glad he had to return. Great characters. And love the general.Perfect ending.
I love the dialog, the setting and pacing! I love ghost stories!
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