by Deren Hansen
The notion that the national book culture we once enjoyed—a consensus about the books everyone who considers themselves literate should have read—is withering under the assault of disruptive businesses and technologies isn’t simply an exercise in good–old–days revisionism: it’s actually one of the last gasps of the cultural monopolies created by trade publishers during the last half–century.
Through a complex web of bestseller lists, influential reviewers, English professors, and book clubs, trade publishers have attempted to create the commercial equivalent of a required reading list. The publishing ecosystem expends a great deal of energy trying to create a sense of urgency by making readers feel they are behind or missing out on the literary cutting edge.
While it is true that shared references are a cornerstone of culture, the idea that a book’s importance is best measured by the number of concurrent readers is one that benefits principally trade publishers and booksellers.
Tracy Hickman has been telling conference audiences for several years, “It doesn't matter if you're published. Being published is nothing. It is everything to be read.”
In the past, writers had to play the commercial lottery of getting published because it was the only game in town. Unfortunately, that system fostered an all–or–nothing mentality: your book was a failure if it wasn’t the talk of the nation.
Rejecting a manuscript because it wasn’t, “sufficiently commercial,” meant the trade publisher believed the book wouldn’t sell in the volume they needed to turn a profit. But that judgment took none of the needs of readers or writers into account.
An author needs readers, but he or she doesn’t need every reader. In fact, it is not possible to write one book that will appeal to every single reader. What is possible, thanks to the recent explosion in publishing opportunities, is to write things that will be read because the distance between writer and reader is now much smaller.
Deren Hansen is the author of the Dunlith Hill Writers Guides. Learn more at dunlithhill.com.
Thanks to everyone who participated in the 2013 "30 Days, 30 Stories" Project!
This year's project was great! We had a fabulous selection of work. To read (or reread), click HERE for the first story.
And remember to leave a comment! We *LOVE* comments!
Wednesday, May 15, 2013
What Matters Most: Readers
Labels:
artisan publishing,
readers,
Tracy Hickman,
writing wednesday
| Reactions: |
Monday, May 13, 2013
The Secret to Getting Published
By Julie Daines.
I just finished up three days at the Storymakers 2013 conference! It was a great event with some wonderful agents and editors, and lots of amazing authors and aspiring authors. I attended some very helpful classes--some of them taught by agents and editors.
When the agents/editors open the floor to questions, inevitably the writers start asking things like:
"What are the upcoming trends in the market?"
"What should I put in my query letter to make it stand out?"
"What genres are you looking for?"
"When is the best time of year to query?"
The agents and editors do their best to answer these questions, but they struggle. Sometimes the writers get bugged. "Why can't they just tell us what they're looking for." Even though these are all different questions, they all boil down to the same thing:
"What is that one magical thing I need to do to get published?"
The bottom line is that there is no one secret, magical, just-out-of-reach trick. They can guide you and offer suggestions on what NOT to do, but none of this is a shoo in.
The only trick that really works is to write a great story. I think is was Victoria Curran who said, after everyone kept asking for the magical secret, "Write what's in your heart, and write to the heart."
A good query is important. Not writing to the trends is important. Choosing the right agent for your genre is important. But the only sure thing that can sell your story is your story.
Write what's in your heart.
Create something that speaks to the heart of the reader.
Write it well.
When the time is right, your story will find a home. No magical tricks involved.
I just finished up three days at the Storymakers 2013 conference! It was a great event with some wonderful agents and editors, and lots of amazing authors and aspiring authors. I attended some very helpful classes--some of them taught by agents and editors.
When the agents/editors open the floor to questions, inevitably the writers start asking things like:
"What are the upcoming trends in the market?"
"What should I put in my query letter to make it stand out?"
"What genres are you looking for?"
"When is the best time of year to query?"
The agents and editors do their best to answer these questions, but they struggle. Sometimes the writers get bugged. "Why can't they just tell us what they're looking for." Even though these are all different questions, they all boil down to the same thing:
"What is that one magical thing I need to do to get published?"
The bottom line is that there is no one secret, magical, just-out-of-reach trick. They can guide you and offer suggestions on what NOT to do, but none of this is a shoo in.
The only trick that really works is to write a great story. I think is was Victoria Curran who said, after everyone kept asking for the magical secret, "Write what's in your heart, and write to the heart."
A good query is important. Not writing to the trends is important. Choosing the right agent for your genre is important. But the only sure thing that can sell your story is your story.
Write what's in your heart.
Create something that speaks to the heart of the reader.
Write it well.
When the time is right, your story will find a home. No magical tricks involved.
| Reactions: |
Saturday, May 11, 2013
Those nasty adverbs
I’m probably not the one to talk about this.
I use them a lot. Religiously, in fact. They just inadvertently
slip in. I write away and Miss Anti-ly Lady - she’s an awesome critiquers - finds
them. Inevitably. What’s wrong with a few adverbs here and there? How do you do
without them? I mean really?
Some of them I can do without. When Anti-ly sees them, and
she sees them all, a good most of them don’t need to be there. I pull them out.
But others I like.
I have been studying the idea and pulled ideas from the
sites listed below. There are a few reasons not to use adverbs. They weaken
your writing. It shows the author somehow needs to choose another way to
express an idea. And lastly, a while ago as they were compiling a book of rules
for writers, someone said don’t use –ly words. Everybody went along with it and
now it’s the law.
In terms of weakened writing, I understand and I agree. It’s
a show, don’t tell thing. The following, for example, presents one sentence stronger
than the other.
-“Why did you do
that?” she asked angrily.
-“Why did you do
that?” she hissed.
It does show a physical cliché that Julie Daines referred to
in a February
post. But without the adverb, it is stronger.
There are adverbs that are unnecessary.
-Jack stealthily hid
behind the door. He quickly pulled out a knife. He finally decided to confront
his assailant.
None of the sentences need the adverbs. June Casgrande blogs
that they are stronger without them. And packed in a tight space the wording doesn’t
sound comfortable.
The Emert site gives great examples of superfluous adverbs.
The adverb is unnecessary in the radio
blared loudly or totally
flabbergasted as blared infers loud and flabbergasted implies astonishment
that is total.
I get that. But adverbs must exist for a reason. A health
nut would want to know if her food is organically grown. When a person smiles,
they could smile mischievously but if they did so shyly, wickedly, or joyfully,
it paints a different picture. Sometimes messages must be spoken emphatically. You
can’t have your characters give up –ly words just to fall back to physical
clichés. I like adverbs.
What is wrong with adverbs in dialogue? My middle grade MC
is still working on figuring out his place in the world and he uses adverbs.
Seriously. It is how kids and people speak. If I want my dialogue to sound
kid-like, seems an adverb here or there wouldn’t hurt.
The most persuasive site I found in objection to adverbs is
Erik Emert’s 2001site.
This is a compilation of the rules, the ones writers are
supposed to adhere to. Emert sites some big names in writing, Browne and King,
and others, so you have to listen. Perhaps I am too much of an amateur to fully
understand. And please pardon my adverb. It just slipped in. But it clarifies
my meaning.
So, “they” say you shouldn’t use –ly words. Others justify
their existence if used judiciously. For Anti-ly Lady, they stick out. I don’t
know about you, but I’ll still slip a few in once in a while.
Carol Williams shared a story at an SCBWI event this year.
She had laid down the law on adverbs. A student dutifully obeyed but had a heck
of a time avoiding referring to her family. And they couldn’t fly anywhere. I
say let’s lighten up on –ly words.
Seriously.
WYFIR
reminder. Don't be too late to sign up for this wonderful conference. Discount
for SCBWI members.
References
Labels:
Carol Williams,
Erik Emert,
Julie Daines,
June Casagrande,
SCBWI,
WYFIR
| Reactions: |
Friday, May 10, 2013
Your Personal Brand
Because I'm traveling today, I have limited time for blogging. I can, however, post a link to an amusing article from The Onion that reminds me of the frequent advice writers receive to build and maintain our personal brand, even before we are published. As is often the case in The Onion, the article is funny and a little too accurate for comfort.
If, somehow, you are not familiar with The Onion, be advised that, although this article does not contain profanity, others on the site do, so you might accidentally run across a strong word somewhere on the page. But I still recommend checking out this article.
If, somehow, you are not familiar with The Onion, be advised that, although this article does not contain profanity, others on the site do, so you might accidentally run across a strong word somewhere on the page. But I still recommend checking out this article.
| Reactions: |
Wednesday, May 8, 2013
James Patterson Mourns the Passing of our National Literary Culture
by Deren Hansen
Several weeks ago James Patterson placed an ad in the New York Times Book Review and in Publishers Weekly asking why the federal government "has stepped in to save banks, and the automobile industry, but where are they on the important subject of books?" (See Salon, "James Patterson speaks out about his aggressive 'book industry bailout' ads")
While many people have taken issue with the notion of a bailout for the traditional publishing industry, I see a deeper issue: what Patterson is really lamenting is the passing of an idealized national book culture.
The last question before the list of 38 books he considers important is, "What will happen if there are no more books like these?"
I was educated at an elite, east-cost university and hold a post-graduate degree. My home is filled with books (more than a ton of book boxes the last time we moved). I've read only four of the thirty-eight books listed in the ad. [To be fair, I've been affected by a few others on the list (e.g., movies).]
What's wrong with me? Why, in terms of Patterson's list, am I so poorly read?
Because I was reading other things.
There was a time when it mattered what was on television: with only three broadcast networks, you could always find people who had watched what you watched last night and wanted to talk about it. Now with hundreds of cable channels, video on demand services like Netflix, and YouTube, we can no longer assume anyone else watched what we watched.
With the possible exception of the Bible, not only is the same true for books, it's actually been a very long time since there were few enough books that one could make any assumptions about what most people had read.
Even though there has never been a national book culture, Patterson's lament is worth considering:
The answer is: we do.
In the infinite online catalog, we can actually vote (through reviews, for example), for the texts we consider worthwhile. Like democracy, the system isn't perfect, but over time it will tend to work better than tyranny, however benign.
Deren Hansen is the author of the Dunlith Hill Writers Guides. Learn more at dunlithhill.com.
Several weeks ago James Patterson placed an ad in the New York Times Book Review and in Publishers Weekly asking why the federal government "has stepped in to save banks, and the automobile industry, but where are they on the important subject of books?" (See Salon, "James Patterson speaks out about his aggressive 'book industry bailout' ads")
While many people have taken issue with the notion of a bailout for the traditional publishing industry, I see a deeper issue: what Patterson is really lamenting is the passing of an idealized national book culture.
The last question before the list of 38 books he considers important is, "What will happen if there are no more books like these?"
I was educated at an elite, east-cost university and hold a post-graduate degree. My home is filled with books (more than a ton of book boxes the last time we moved). I've read only four of the thirty-eight books listed in the ad. [To be fair, I've been affected by a few others on the list (e.g., movies).]
What's wrong with me? Why, in terms of Patterson's list, am I so poorly read?
Because I was reading other things.
There was a time when it mattered what was on television: with only three broadcast networks, you could always find people who had watched what you watched last night and wanted to talk about it. Now with hundreds of cable channels, video on demand services like Netflix, and YouTube, we can no longer assume anyone else watched what we watched.
With the possible exception of the Bible, not only is the same true for books, it's actually been a very long time since there were few enough books that one could make any assumptions about what most people had read.
Even though there has never been a national book culture, Patterson's lament is worth considering:
- What does literary culture mean in the new world of textual abundance created by Amazon and its ilk?
- Who decides which novels belong in the canon of literature with which everyone should be familiar?
The answer is: we do.
In the infinite online catalog, we can actually vote (through reviews, for example), for the texts we consider worthwhile. Like democracy, the system isn't perfect, but over time it will tend to work better than tyranny, however benign.
Deren Hansen is the author of the Dunlith Hill Writers Guides. Learn more at dunlithhill.com.
| Reactions: |
Saturday, May 4, 2013
30 days, 30 stories, and WIFYR
Thanks, Sarah, for another fun April with a new piece to read
everyday. I didn’t necessarily get to them each day, but enjoyed them when I caught
up with them.
I am impressed with the variety and the talent. The young
man, I think you said he is 10, has got some impressive talent and I hope he
stays with it. The illustrations and graphic stories were fun. Screenplay and
poetry and adult fiction and kid lit graced the month’s choices. We’ve got good
writers in our midst.
I need to put in another plug for WIFYR. This is the annual
Writing and Illustrating For Young Readers conference in June. Here is a link: http://www.wifyr.com/ Carol Williams puts on a
great show every year, pulling in agents and editors and amazing faculty. I
can’t tell you all of the reasons why you need to attend, but illustrator Julie
Olson can give you 10 good reasons. Click here: http://jujubeeillustrations.blogspot.com/2013/03/conference-success.html
SCBWI members get a discount.
Thanks again to all who entertained us this last month.
Labels:
Carol Williams,
WiFYR
| Reactions: |
Friday, May 3, 2013
Scapple
It's rare that I write about a piece of software I've never seen, much less used. But I've been reading about Scapple, a new note-scribbling app for Mac from Literature and Latte, the people who brought us Scrivener. Because it is only available for Mac and I'm a Windows and Linux user, I haven't actually tried this, but from what I've been reading, it is an intriguing tool for writers.
Scapple is like a blank piece of paper on your Mac. You can add a note anywhere on the paper by clicking on a spot and typing. You can join notes with a line by dragging one note on top of another. There are other shortcuts to help you work out your ideas too.
It's not quite like a mindmap. Mindmaps are useful for planning a story, but can be frustrating because you can only have one central node, and everything has to branch off that node, or be connected directly to another node. Problem is, when you're planning a project, you often have ideas that do not immediately connect to your other thoughts. Traditional mindmapping software does not allow for these disconnected thoughts.
It's kind of like whiteboarding software with mindmapping advantages, but it's more like a big zoomable sheet of paper that you can use how ever you want. Make that a piece of paper that lets you move your doodles around on it. Then, when you're ready, you can import your Scapple sheet to your Scrivener corkboard.
It sounds like a simple tool without extra bells and whistles that get in the way. You just use it to do what you want to do and youd on't have tow ork around and between unwanted features to do it.
It's not enough to make me go out and buy a Mac, but if this works as well as it might, it will create a rare pang of Mac envy.
Update: A Windows version of Scapple is in the works. No availability date has been announced.
Other Tech News
And in other news, this week's software update for the Nook HD and Nook HD+ readers, available now, includes the entire Google Play App store, transforming what was already a great reader into a full-fledged tablet. One of the more interesting things about this news is that the Nook can now run the Kindle App for Android, which means you can now read your Amazon books on the Barnes & Noble Nook. I already loved my 7" Nook HD. I now love it even more.
Scapple is like a blank piece of paper on your Mac. You can add a note anywhere on the paper by clicking on a spot and typing. You can join notes with a line by dragging one note on top of another. There are other shortcuts to help you work out your ideas too.
It's not quite like a mindmap. Mindmaps are useful for planning a story, but can be frustrating because you can only have one central node, and everything has to branch off that node, or be connected directly to another node. Problem is, when you're planning a project, you often have ideas that do not immediately connect to your other thoughts. Traditional mindmapping software does not allow for these disconnected thoughts.
It's kind of like whiteboarding software with mindmapping advantages, but it's more like a big zoomable sheet of paper that you can use how ever you want. Make that a piece of paper that lets you move your doodles around on it. Then, when you're ready, you can import your Scapple sheet to your Scrivener corkboard.
It sounds like a simple tool without extra bells and whistles that get in the way. You just use it to do what you want to do and youd on't have tow ork around and between unwanted features to do it.
It's not enough to make me go out and buy a Mac, but if this works as well as it might, it will create a rare pang of Mac envy.
Update: A Windows version of Scapple is in the works. No availability date has been announced.
Other Tech News
And in other news, this week's software update for the Nook HD and Nook HD+ readers, available now, includes the entire Google Play App store, transforming what was already a great reader into a full-fledged tablet. One of the more interesting things about this news is that the Nook can now run the Kindle App for Android, which means you can now read your Amazon books on the Barnes & Noble Nook. I already loved my 7" Nook HD. I now love it even more.
| Reactions: |
Subscribe to:
Posts (Atom)


