*The fear devouring
Thomas’s stomach and the thick heat of the night combined their forces against
him until he was drenched in sweat. And wearing a scratchy ski mask to hide his face didn't help the situation.
“What’s wrong with
you?” Sardines, the burly kid who always smelled like fish scowled at
Thomas as the group of boys quietly moved through the shadowy remains of the ruined
stores and shops. Traveling through the city's carcass was safest if you could stay off the streets.
Thomas stared at
his feet. What was he supposed to say? Something like, “Oh, nothing much. It’s just that ever
since those Mole People tunneled up from the center of the Earth and enslaved
mankind, I’ve been a little jumpy. And sneaking into one of their Mole Hills to steal food and weapons isn’t my idea
of a fun night out.” Instead he said nothing.
Sardines whispered
loudly, “Why did we bring along mushbrains?”
Thomas wondered
the same thing.
Gage stopped and stared at Sardines. The
rest of the boys did, too. “What was that?” Gage, the
leader of the Resistance, was only thirteen, but he had plans to overthrow the
Mole People’s rule and save the world. At least, that's what The Golden Prophecy said would happen. And who were they to argue with a prophecy?
Sardines glanced at
Thomas. “I, well, that is…he’s useless. He’s just gonna get us killed. Or
worse.”
Thomas didn’t want
to think about, “Or worse.”
Gage narrowed his
eyes at Sardines. “I didn't want to bring him either. But we need the supplies. So, are you volunteering to fill and carry back four packs yourself?”
Everyone in the raiding party had two packs thrown over their shoulders. Thomas adjusted his, wishing
Sardines would say yes.
But the obnoxious
kid scowled. “There wouldn’t be time.”
“Exactly.” Gage glanced
at Thomas.
Thomas looked
away. He didn’t need to see the disappointment in his brother’s eyes. He got enough of that from everyone else. Thomas
and Gage were identical twins, but were still as different as Sardines and
a kid who showered.
Gage was a hero. Thomas was useless.
Gage was a hero. Thomas was useless.
The group
continued on, stealthily moving through the destroyed buildings until they
reached what was once downtown. Sitting in a dark alley, the boys stared at the
largest Mole Hill Thomas had ever seen. Thomas took in the giant mound of
debris, at least ten stories tall, made up of broken cars, chunks of concrete,
loads of dirt and gravel and pieces of buildings. Inside the
hill, the Mole People made a maze of tunnels and rooms. The fear in Thomas's stomach threatened to crawl up his throat and escape as a scream.
“This is simple,”
Gage said. “Just follow us.” He motioned to the two boys next to him. “Get out
your flashlights. Stay close. We’ll find their storage room, stuff our packs
and get out. Let’s go.”
Thomas made his
feet move along with the group, wishing he was back in their hideout But everything went according to Gage’s plan. At
first.
They moved through
the Mole Hill’s tunnels undetected, found the storage room and began filling
their packs with fresh vegetables, fruit, meat and laser guns.
Swinging his full
packs onto his shoulders, Thomas turned to find Gage standing nearby. “Great
job, bro,” he whispered.
Thomas blinked in
surprise. Gage never risked someone finding out Thomas was his brother, which
was why Thomas had to wear the ski mask. Everyone thought he had a scar he was
embarrassed about. But the truth was, it was Gage who had something to be
embarrassed about.
Thomas.
“Um, yeah…thanks.”
Thomas looked at Gage, surprised to see his brother smiling at him.
“I’m glad you
came.”
Thomas nodded. He
was about to say, “Me, too.” But then something caught his eye. He swung his
flashlight around and pointed it at the entrance to the storage room.
A strange brown
creature with sharp claws and scaly brown skin filled the arch. He spread his
arms out and opened his mouth wide, turning his head toward Thomas.
“No!” shouted Gage
as he threw himself in front of Thomas just as a stream of spit shot from the
Mole Person's mouth, hitting Gage in the chest.
The other boys
rushed the strange creature. It managed to squirt three of them before the others took him down. Thomas dropped
to his knees by Gage’s side. Gage gave Thomas a small smile, but he didn’t move
to get up. The toxic poison had begun its work. In five minutes Gage would be completely paralyzed.
“Thomas,” Gage
mumbled.
“Someone
help!” Thomas shouted as the other boys escaped into the tunnel.
Thomas grabbed Gage’s arms, intending to drag
him to safety.
“Thomas,”
Gage said again. "You have to go."
Pulling
Gage toward the tunnel entrance, Thomas ignored his brother.
“Thomas!”
Gage shouted.
Thomas
shook his head.
“You
know… the…the prophecy?” Gage asked.
Thomas wanted to laugh. “That’s like asking, “Hey, did you know you have hands? Of course. We all know who the hero of the family is.”
“No….you
don’t!”
In the distance,
Thomas heard a dull thumping.
Footsteps.
Gage continued. His voice slurring as he spoke rapidly. “I knew. I knew the
truth. But I thought I could do it. I thought I could protect you.” Thomas tuned his brother's rambling out as he tried to run. But he tripped, finding himself on the ground by Gage.
The footsteps grew
louder. “Hey! Who’s there?” a voice whispered loudly. It was Sardines.
Thomas moved to
get to his feet. His brother said, “It’s me, Gage.” He ripped the ski mask from Thomas’s
face and kicked him toward the boys who came back.
A light blinded
Thomas’s eyes.
“It’s him,” said a
voice. The boys snatched Thomas under his arms. They pulled him down the
tunnel. Louder footsteps filled the air. Mole People.
"Stop!" Thomas shouted. He fought the arms dragging him away from his brother. But as they left the Mole Hill, Sardines asked, "Who was that back there?"
Gage's words finally sunk into Thomas's shocked brain. “The prophecy was
about you. You're the hero. You have to save the world!”
"Come on, Gage." Sardines said as they ducked down the dark alley and started their journey back to the hideout. "Who got spit on?"
"It was..." Thomas closed his eyes. He thought of his brother and their broken world. He thought of the prophecy. And he knew what he had to do, who he had to become. "It was Thomas."
You can read more of Erin's nutty ramblings at her blog.
You can read more of Erin's nutty ramblings at her blog.
* I learned something important while writing this. It is really really hard to write a short story. Especially if you do it at the last minute and stay up really late. For example, let's say, 2:30 in the morning....hmmmm....I'm hoping this at least kind of makes sense...
5 comments:
Erin, this is fabulous! I was hooked from the front - great job!
Great job. I loved it. Very exciting. I'm terrible at short stories, so I think this is fabulous!
Great story! But then, any story that name-checks the Mole People has to be good. Love that movie and others like it. Most of all, I love your Sardines character. I'll read just about anything with characters like that.
YOU guys are awesome. Thank you so much! I just keep thinking of how I'd tweak it, what I'd add, how I'd make it better. But....I'd also be making it longer!
This was a fun exercise. And, I agree, Scott. I love characters like Sardines. :)
Interesting story. Sardines is a very unique name or nickname for a character. : )
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