By Randall McNair
Jonny loved his staple gun.
CACHUNK
He bought it at a yard sale from the old lady next door.
CACHUNK
Where a little cripple boy sold lemonade from his wheelchair.
CACHUNK
Jonny named his new gun Buckshot.
CACHUNK
Every time he added a new bass to his collection.
CACHUNK
Buckshot got another notch.
CACHUNK
It didn't take long
CACHUNK
before Jonny had almost every kind of bass in the world
CACHUNK
pinned to the wall
CACHUNK
of his barn.
CACHUNK CACHUNK
and his collection was world famous.
People the world over would come to Rustburg and shovel a nickel from their pocket to be allowed past the giant red barn doors. Inside it was dark as tar except for a hundred pin pricks of light coming through the slats and nail holes in the ceiling.
CACHUNK
He bought it at a yard sale from the old lady next door.
CACHUNK
Where a little cripple boy sold lemonade from his wheelchair.
CACHUNK
Jonny named his new gun Buckshot.
CACHUNK
Every time he added a new bass to his collection.
CACHUNK
Buckshot got another notch.
CACHUNK
It didn't take long
CACHUNK
before Jonny had almost every kind of bass in the world
CACHUNK
pinned to the wall
CACHUNK
of his barn.
CACHUNK CACHUNK
and his collection was world famous.
People the world over would come to Rustburg and shovel a nickel from their pocket to be allowed past the giant red barn doors. Inside it was dark as tar except for a hundred pin pricks of light coming through the slats and nail holes in the ceiling.
When the
barn was full, Jonny would collect his jar spilling over with nickels, and
close the big doors.
It took a few moments, with
only the soft slits of sunlight falling down like a thousand stars. Then, one
by one, each observer would gasp as his or her eyes adjusted, revealing the
monument of fish stapled before them.
Filled with wonder and
amazement the crowds would whistle, holler and stamp their feet.
"Bravo! Incredible! Encore!"
would ring inevitable exclamations. Their excitement drifting for miles across
gold and green hills. Scarcely could Jonny bow, or open the doors before he was
swept up on the shoulders of the passionate crowd.
It didn't take long before
every person on the planet, it seemed, had come and come again to see Jonny's
extravaganza of bass and come away a better person for it.
Every
person on the planet that is, except Jimmy. The little boy who lived next door.
Jimmy was too weak to leave his small little bed up in the attic room of his grandmother's farm home. Although she would have liked to very much, Jimmy's grandmother was too old and frail to carry her grandson the scanty yards from where he lay, over to Jonny's bass barn.
So every day Jimmy watched.
Jimmy was too weak to leave his small little bed up in the attic room of his grandmother's farm home. Although she would have liked to very much, Jimmy's grandmother was too old and frail to carry her grandson the scanty yards from where he lay, over to Jonny's bass barn.
So every day Jimmy watched.
Week after
month he watched Jonny carry bass into the barn, would catch glint of the sun reflecting
from Jonny's staple gun, and if the wind blew just right, he might hear a
distant but resolute:
Cachunk.
Day after day he cheered and waved at Jonny as the ecstatic masses burst from the red barn doors; but Jonny, caught up in glory, never saw the frail little ghost of a boy, smiling at him from the window.
Cachunk.
Day after day he cheered and waved at Jonny as the ecstatic masses burst from the red barn doors; but Jonny, caught up in glory, never saw the frail little ghost of a boy, smiling at him from the window.
He never
saw how day after month after year, that smile never faded, even as the little
waving arm grew weaker and weaker.
Then one day, just one, nobody knows how or why, no one came to see Jonny's barn.
No one dropped a nickel in Jonny's jar or came to lift Jonny on their shoulders. Everything was so still: so quiet, that one could almost hear the sound of the peanuts growing in their fields.
Then one day, just one, nobody knows how or why, no one came to see Jonny's barn.
No one dropped a nickel in Jonny's jar or came to lift Jonny on their shoulders. Everything was so still: so quiet, that one could almost hear the sound of the peanuts growing in their fields.
As he sat on his milk stool in
front of his barn; as Jonny looked out over the empty horizon, he saw the
farmhouse next door, where a yard sale sign had once stood years before.
He noticed a little attic window again for the first time, and in that window a smiling little face.
He noticed a little attic window again for the first time, and in that window a smiling little face.
Slowly he walked across the
yard, then through the back porch into the old woman's home, up the stairs, and
without knocking, softly turned the knob of the boys attic room. Jonny looked
down and smiled at the boy he'd not seen since the year he'd brought home his
first bass. Where had each of those
days gone?
Taking Buckshot from its holster,
Jonny handed it to Jimmy. Then carefully he picked up the frail, broken body
and without a word carried Jimmy down the stairs, and out to his barn.
Reaching into his own pocket
Jonny picked out one of his own nickels and dropped it in the jar.
His whole soul alive with
wonder Jimmy was layed in the fresh new straw, clutching buckshot in his lap, While
Jonny closed the doors.
Pin-pricks of light poured
down all around filling the barn with heavenly light.
Then,
as Jimmy's eyes adjusted to the darkness
each fish,
one by one
turned their head towards the light,
and began to sing.
as Jimmy's eyes adjusted to the darkness
each fish,
one by one
turned their head towards the light,
and began to sing.
5 comments:
This is the kind of story I love because when I'm done with it, it still leaves me thinking. Thanks for sharing!
I'm with Julie. This one engages the mind and keeps it engaged. I also like the way it's formatted. Nice job!
A appreciate your kind words. :)
And by A I mean I.
It stayed with me too, long after I read it the first time. Wonderful imagery. Thanks for sharing.
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