The basic formula
for a story goes something like this: a main character wants something; MC sets
out to achieve that thing; MC meets with obstacles; MC overcomes obstacles.
Simple, right? Everyone can write a novel. No big deal
Quiet often the
conflict the MC faces is generated by an antagonist. Antagonists can be the
demons floating around in the protagonist's head or they can be the classic
arch-villain, the schoolyard bully, Darth Vader, or Lord Voldemort. We will
stick to the human, physical antagonist for our purposes here. The writer needs
to understand their antagonist.
Antagonists are not
just bad guys wearing black hats. They are complex people with their own
histories and goals. It is not that they oppose the protagonist. They have
their own agenda that they are trying to accomplish. In a reversal of roles,
your MC is the obstacle the antagonist encounters in reaching their goal. The
school bully wants money to buy cigarettes. Vader tries to bring Luke to the
dark side. He-Who-Must-Not-Be-Named wants power and immortality. And they all
have histories that rationalize their behaviors
John Truby in his Anatomy of Story says that “the trick to
defining your hero and figuring out your story is to figure out your opponent.”
He says writers should love their antagonist because he will aid the writer in
so many ways. The opponent is important structurally. Antagonists attack the
MC’s weakness, forcing the hero to deal with them and grow. Thus, the MC learns
through the antagonist.
The repeated theme
at WIFYR this summer was to torture your characters. A session by agent,
Ammi-Joan Paquette, touched on the subject. Your role as a writer, she said, is
to be the evil overlord, not the hero’s mother. Make your antagonists bigger, stronger,
and smarter than the MC. Let them throw up the roadblocks and thwart your hero
at every turn.
Antagonists, you’ve
got to love them.
4 comments:
Good post. We've had a few good posts on this topic, and yours is definitely one of them. It's a subject that needs to be repeated often. I try to remember one of the points you made. The villain is the good guy in his own story. His family and friends believe your protagonist is the bad guy.
(I have to remember not to comment from my phone. It always posts multiple times...)
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