tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8753047208077056954.post6550614738820420582..comments2023-11-09T07:09:33.891-08:00Comments on Utah Children's Writers: 30 Days: Almost a WhisperSarahhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10166492055392141231noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8753047208077056954.post-88097087365758306672009-04-22T11:41:00.000-07:002009-04-22T11:41:00.000-07:00Wow. Great atmosphere, great tension, great descr...Wow. Great atmosphere, great tension, great description, great job! I got goosebumps!Tiffanynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8753047208077056954.post-21883934604305464012009-04-21T19:46:00.000-07:002009-04-21T19:46:00.000-07:00Thanks so much for the comments, everyone; it mean...Thanks so much for the comments, everyone; it means a lot to me!Kiirsihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00674571963548381448noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8753047208077056954.post-6368802798175411802009-04-21T18:42:00.000-07:002009-04-21T18:42:00.000-07:00Your story pulled me right in! I was getting nervo...Your story pulled me right in! I was getting nervous for Emily! Loved your story!Taffyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11796711977284429278noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8753047208077056954.post-83860052606787064782009-04-21T10:25:00.000-07:002009-04-21T10:25:00.000-07:00Whoa! Loved it. Nice job, Kiirsi.Whoa! Loved it. Nice job, Kiirsi.Sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10166492055392141231noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8753047208077056954.post-90574478048759980542009-04-20T22:26:00.000-07:002009-04-20T22:26:00.000-07:00It's a great story! I love how much we learned abo...It's a great story! I love how much we learned about these two girls in such a few words! And Simon sounds so creepy, I'm happy he's gone!Yamilehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08769312615756253197noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8753047208077056954.post-8876779904873197132009-04-20T15:44:00.000-07:002009-04-20T15:44:00.000-07:00Wow!!!! That was good! I felt like I was reading a...Wow!!!! That was good! I felt like I was reading an excerpt of one of my favorite murder/mystery authors except it was resolved (hence the "short story") in the end. Great Job Kiirsi!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8753047208077056954.post-63007721861816641922009-04-20T14:26:00.000-07:002009-04-20T14:26:00.000-07:00Well Done! Your story was very intense.Well Done! Your story was very intense.Jolynnnoreply@blogger.com