tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8753047208077056954.post5936618498988649378..comments2023-11-09T07:09:33.891-08:00Comments on Utah Children's Writers: 30 Days: "The Peach Promiser"Sarahhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10166492055392141231noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8753047208077056954.post-61149345820483364522009-04-04T17:47:00.000-07:002009-04-04T17:47:00.000-07:00My mouth started watering for peaches! Mattie has ...My mouth started watering for peaches! Mattie has good brothers to help her.Taffyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11796711977284429278noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8753047208077056954.post-39769203109524037192009-04-04T13:39:00.000-07:002009-04-04T13:39:00.000-07:00Nice! It's fun how you made so much time pass in ...Nice! It's fun how you made so much time pass in such a short story. I'm curious, though...how old is Mattie? I thought at first she was an old woman since she needed so much help with her yard, but she can't be that ancient since she has a college-age brother.Kiirsihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00674571963548381448noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8753047208077056954.post-37595003265391072302009-04-04T11:41:00.000-07:002009-04-04T11:41:00.000-07:00500 words or less is brutal, but it is a great exe...500 words or less is brutal, but it is a great exercise for an author to tighten their work. Great job, Clysta. Way to be brave by posting it too!Sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10166492055392141231noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8753047208077056954.post-27820210038802913572009-04-04T07:25:00.000-07:002009-04-04T07:25:00.000-07:00Fun story. I sense a sequel! It's not easy compl...Fun story. I sense a sequel! It's not easy completing the arc of a story in under 500 words. Nice work. Keep it up.Dannynoreply@blogger.com