tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8753047208077056954.post5138751894863794714..comments2023-11-09T07:09:33.891-08:00Comments on Utah Children's Writers: 30 Days: "Everything" by David HuletSarahhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10166492055392141231noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8753047208077056954.post-81701918142424059222011-04-30T20:18:03.331-07:002011-04-30T20:18:03.331-07:00Yummy pizza. We had some tonight. Glad I ate befor...Yummy pizza. We had some tonight. Glad I ate before I read your story or I would have tried to play Pac Man with my slices and my kids :) lolTaffyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11796711977284429278noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8753047208077056954.post-13701726339827450652011-04-29T06:32:34.075-07:002011-04-29T06:32:34.075-07:00Wow!
Hi David, You know I'll never take pizza ...Wow!<br />Hi David, You know I'll never take pizza for granted again... Good way to make me really see pizza and think of pac-man, pellet-eater, revenge, you and on and on . . . <br />I really enjoyed it, <br />Marion SteigerAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8753047208077056954.post-14126672727183206702011-04-28T20:39:32.057-07:002011-04-28T20:39:32.057-07:00@Scott: Thanks for the comment. I pretty much had ...@Scott: Thanks for the comment. I pretty much had to leave out everything, including the flavor of the pizza. It was in there originally, but word limit is so frustrating sometimes. My final version is still 34 words over, and I left out relatively all detail about these people other than their names. Sacrifices, I guess. :)Davidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17072933336481450048noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8753047208077056954.post-57698925311012816212011-04-28T19:34:19.352-07:002011-04-28T19:34:19.352-07:00Fun story. Way to make a lesson fun to read! But w...Fun story. Way to make a lesson fun to read! But what kind pizza was it? And did it have anchovies? Anchovies are sadly maligned in this part of the country. :)<br /><br />Seriously, though, nice job.Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07450784902644202694noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8753047208077056954.post-56210126929960722622011-04-28T10:12:56.943-07:002011-04-28T10:12:56.943-07:00@Julie: Well... "kids" is relative. I pu...@Julie: Well... "kids" is relative. I purposely refrained from defining age in this story. And the rules for 30 days submissions said the story could be for any age level. Maybe I cheated a little :PDavidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17072933336481450048noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8753047208077056954.post-50026114505816705172011-04-28T10:11:45.686-07:002011-04-28T10:11:45.686-07:00@Cathy: Your life will never be the same, mwahaha....@Cathy: Your life will never be the same, mwahaha. Everytime you and yours eat pizza, you will think of this story. :DDavidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17072933336481450048noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8753047208077056954.post-64740854847918144022011-04-28T08:40:51.066-07:002011-04-28T08:40:51.066-07:00Man, I never thought pizza could be so symbolic. G...Man, I never thought pizza could be so symbolic. Good job, David.Cathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04610208244881298012noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8753047208077056954.post-65623548321442653712011-04-28T08:35:30.880-07:002011-04-28T08:35:30.880-07:00Fun story. Those are some pretty insightful kids!Fun story. Those are some pretty insightful kids!Julie Daineshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08350205936357263571noreply@blogger.com