tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8753047208077056954.post3157929204292723321..comments2023-11-09T07:09:33.891-08:00Comments on Utah Children's Writers: 30 Days: "Braxton and His Stinky Jeans"Sarahhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10166492055392141231noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8753047208077056954.post-3044129307825977832009-04-03T13:31:00.000-07:002009-04-03T13:31:00.000-07:00Great work! I liked the tempo of the story and th...Great work! I liked the tempo of the story and the surprise ending with the April Fool "gotcha" at the end. You got me too!DChttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14425449523435058278noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8753047208077056954.post-34586244107127526422009-04-02T23:37:00.000-07:002009-04-02T23:37:00.000-07:00What a cool Nana! I loved the narrator's voice and...What a cool Nana! I loved the narrator's voice and I couldn't read fast enough to see how the story ended. <BR/>How brave of you to go first!Yamilehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08769312615756253197noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8753047208077056954.post-64537560963078002852009-04-02T19:46:00.000-07:002009-04-02T19:46:00.000-07:00Great voice throughout. Good idea for April Fools...Great voice throughout. Good idea for April Fools! Nana is a refreshing grandma--one that can relate to kids and get inside their heads (I think SHE wrote the story after all).pianomomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08716336670853652296noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8753047208077056954.post-18745975917101004232009-04-01T13:48:00.000-07:002009-04-01T13:48:00.000-07:00It was great to get to know the narrator in so few...It was great to get to know the narrator in so few words. Fun story!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8753047208077056954.post-31526895478464500532009-04-01T12:34:00.000-07:002009-04-01T12:34:00.000-07:00Funny story! Good job!Funny story! Good job!Taffyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11796711977284429278noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8753047208077056954.post-74245843901884740892009-04-01T11:59:00.000-07:002009-04-01T11:59:00.000-07:00Cute little story!Cute little story!Jakobhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12461754942935823231noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8753047208077056954.post-5324468318961570812009-04-01T09:34:00.000-07:002009-04-01T09:34:00.000-07:00Hey Marion, Is this part of a novel you're writing...Hey Marion, <BR/>Is this part of a novel you're writing? Good voice, very authentic teenager.Kristin Hayeshttp://ent.about.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8753047208077056954.post-5072767974348336312009-04-01T08:46:00.000-07:002009-04-01T08:46:00.000-07:00Good job! Kudos to you, also, for going first!Good job! Kudos to you, also, for going first!Kiirsihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00674571963548381448noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8753047208077056954.post-27324924427342877542009-04-01T08:39:00.000-07:002009-04-01T08:39:00.000-07:00Nana is a writer for sure. Poor kid.Nana is a writer for sure. Poor kid.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com