tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8753047208077056954.post1152280558211426628..comments2023-11-09T07:09:33.891-08:00Comments on Utah Children's Writers: 30 Days, 30 Stories: Three Deaths of Devin OchreSarahhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10166492055392141231noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8753047208077056954.post-72538971498369938832012-04-03T07:49:46.192-07:002012-04-03T07:49:46.192-07:00What a great story! I loved "At least the hou...What a great story! I loved "At least the hours are 24/7 and the line never ends. Ever." Made me LOL.Emilyhttp://parentingfrontline.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8753047208077056954.post-20734746764210286782012-04-02T06:35:04.605-07:002012-04-02T06:35:04.605-07:00Fun and thought provoking!Fun and thought provoking!Melhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11112472689330078643noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8753047208077056954.post-86541618597743733612012-04-01T14:10:16.606-07:002012-04-01T14:10:16.606-07:00Perfect! I loved the line: "His breath smelle...Perfect! I loved the line: "His breath smelled like mustard and decomposed flesh." Can't get much worse than that.Lisa Campbellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08526951325189158065noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8753047208077056954.post-62280957973467404462012-04-01T11:29:22.299-07:002012-04-01T11:29:22.299-07:00Fun and clever story. i loved it, thanks. I also l...Fun and clever story. i loved it, thanks. I also loved Writing for Charity, so thanks for helping put that together.Julie Daineshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08350205936357263571noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8753047208077056954.post-67429192037678726212012-04-01T10:17:05.366-07:002012-04-01T10:17:05.366-07:00I love me some Billy Goats Gruff. This is a fun ta...I love me some Billy Goats Gruff. This is a fun take on one of my all-time favorite stories.Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07450784902644202694noreply@blogger.com